cause and effect

Cause and Effect Chart

Instructions: As you read, list causes (the things being done) in the left column and their effects (what happens as a result of what is being done) in the right column.

Topic:  Farming and its effect on the environment.

Cause		Effect
Draining the water from underneath the ground to spray on their farm to cause erosion.	➜	We get more cows and therefore we get more products.
Organic fertilizers and synthetic fertilizers.	➜	organic fertilizers is a fertilizer that aren't man made chemicals  but synthetic are man made chemicals.
Farmers drain the water for more stock.	➜	they kill eels and white bait.
Farmers can wash off the nutrients of the plant.	➜	and it goes into rivers to become polluted.
Farmers cut down all the trees to make more area for the farm.	➜	it will cause erosion.
do not use sea water on your crops.	➜	because the salt will suck the moisture
farmers cut down the trees.	➜	it could also cause erosion. if the dirt falls apart.
compaction	➜	the plants can’t grow.

A very awkward Monkey

Title: A very awkward monkey

Topic: A Very awkward monkey who collects stamps.

Purpose: To report and inform on a topic.

Audience: Readers of my blog, students and teachers at PES.

Text Parts/Planning: Do your planning here.

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Start your writing below the line. When you have finished fill out the effective writing checklist and get your buddy to check as well. (Copy and paste the √)

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A very awkward monkey named Chester  obsessed with stamps but there was always a stamp that was on his mind a rear stamp called a Abraham lincoln golden award stamp that could only be found in Paris or England. But he decided to go to the most riskiest place ever because Chester always loved adventures. This place was horrible it was called GOLD COAST AUSTRALIA.  

People never liked this place because. the australians are rude, ruthless, and EVIL LLLLLLLLLLL some people may think they're nice but once they even had a war over the cutest Koala, “ really they had a war over a silly Koala if I had a war it would be over Roger Tuivasa Sheck biggest fan ugh ugh sorry back to the story Chester could not wait to get going.

Once arriving to Brisbane he then travelled to the Gold coast where he started his adventure.  searching day and night but had no luck.

On the last day he saw a old man with the most glorious stamp shop but sadly was about to close  so he sprinted as fast as he could but did not have the speed to get there in time. With hope loss the sad monkey walked. But wait Chester found something shiny and gold on the ground “OMG I’ve found it WOOO HOOO” finding the stamp took it to auction and got 2oo,ooo,ooo,ooo,ooo dollars.     

Is  My Writing Effective?	√
Are my paragraph/s about one MAIN idea?
Do my paragraph/s have more than one sentence?  (usually 2-4)
Are the sentences connected and build up the MAIN idea?
Do my sentences in my paragraphs begin in different ways?
Are the sentences varied?  e.g. in length, in complexity
Have I used different types of sentences?   e.g Statements(.) Questions(?) Exclamations(!) OR Speech (“ “)
Have I carefully chosen words/vocabulary in my sentences?
Do my sentences and paragraphs meet the purpose?
Do my sentences/paragraphs appeal to the reader/audience?

Halloween.

Halloween.

Lollies.

ghost’s.

Jaclyn's.

scary figures.

ugly masks.

costumes.

fun.

monsters.

aliens.

different species\ witches,zombies,vampires,and ghosts.

I’ve always thought that why would people add lollies to Halloween and this my answer people added lollies to give it a kids element, from being ugly\ weird faces to funny costumes and weird monsters and just having fun. I also think Halloween is about people trickle treating and having a away from parents and just having fun and get to run around.

Mauis big hook

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Kawau island

I cannot wait  to explore Kawau island  next year it will be so much fun like the landscape. this week the year 6 kids are going to Kawau island and they get to do fun activities like kayaking, abseiling and much much more.  

Slowly creeping through the woods a young girl and her brother searched for a place to spend the night.There names were Sophie and Graham they were only 10 years old and they did not know what they're getting themselves  into.

Lurking through the woods Sophie hear something in the background “Graham did you hear that” “no replied Graham” “Hmmm” they continued on their journey suddenly Graham could hear the swift noise that his sister could hear. The neck hairs on Grahams neck arose. “Swish” in the corner of Sophies eye she saw a safe house “Graham  I see a safe house” they quickly sprinted to the house. The unknown whisper continued to call but once Sophie attended the door the whisper appeared right in front of them was a witch.

“ Well little children what are you doing in forest alone hmmmm” Graham did not trust the witch and said to his sister “ distract her and go for the door” “ok replied his sister.

Distracting the witch Graham had reached for door but it was locked so he found a piece of metal and shaped into a key “ hopefully this works” inserting the key onto the hole his sister fought as hard as she could Graham on the hand had trouble with the key “come on” Graham reached for the door knob and twisted it “I got it Sophie rushed to the door and quickly shut it “ well you thought you could lock me out ay but know one can contain a witch.”  Sadly the children had been  contained in a cage. “  I’m hungry I feel like eating some human flesh. Turning on the oven Sophie planned a idea to bring the evil witch to the oven and chuck her in.  Everything went to plan and from that day on the Mighty Graham and Marvelous Sophie became witch hunters.

Defeating all of the possible witches of the entire galaxy.But there was one more witch whose head was worth more than one thousand tokens. Graham had heard about this and decided to set sail to the place they called the forest of doom.  to be continued.....    

     

Roger Tuivasa Sheck facts

Born in Apia Samoa Roger Tuivasa Sheck is hopefully going to become face Rugby League in the future of NRL. This talented player is currently representing the New Zealand Kiwis in the RLWC (Rugby league world cup) GO KIWIS!!!!!!! You can obviously tell I support the Kiwis but its not about me I want to know what team you like. As a young boy Roger attended the Otahuhu college in Auckland New Zealand, where he also loved to play Rugby union and Rugby League.Tuivasa-Sheck represented the New Zealand rugby union schoolboy team and captained Otahuhu College at the New Zealand Rugby League's Secondary Schools tournament in 2011 before being signed by the Sydney Roosters.

He played for the Rooters  Toyota cup team in 2012 and scored 9 tries in 12 games before moving on to the Roosters NSW reserve-grade team. On 27 July he made his National Rugby League debut. The all mighty  Roosters against the striking Gold coast Titans. in what was round 21 of the 2012 season. On October the 2nd Roger was named in the junior Kiwis to face the junior Kangaroos.On 14 April 2013, Tuivasa-Sheck was named in the 19-man New Zealand squad to face Australia in the 2013 ANZAC Test.After the 2013 NRL Grand Final, Tuivasa-Sheck was named in the Kiwis 24 man squad for the Rugby League World Cup. He made his debut against Samoa.

For more facts about your Nrl players go to my blog peslouisp.blogspot.com Hoped you enjoyed.